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The only thing bugging me a bit is her chest. There are good and bad things here. The inking and coloring make a very successful sense of form. Where the inking is thicker around the arc of the breast, and tapers away as it would become smaller shows you're getting very familiar with showing 3 dimensions in only a 2 dimensional thing with line weights. However, the actual location and shape of the breasts are a bit anatomically awkward, and the shading of the cleavage is very light, making it look like she has only 1 boob, being squished into cleavage, instead of 2 being pressed together.
Really, this is a beautiful and fairly successful piece, though, from the composition to the color choices, and it's very pleasing to look at. If this is what you're bringing from your art block, I look forward to seeing more!
I really appreciate it. C:
I'm glad to hear or better...read your opinion and advice. C:
You really got a good point there with her chest. It is strange that sometimes I don't see it until someone is mentioning it.
I'll try to work on that! ;3
It really made my day.